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think that Paul meant that he can see everything by when they’re parents aren’t around Erik does bad stuff. Like when Erik snuck out of the house and his parents didn’t know. Another thing that he might of meant when he said that was that he can see other peoples personality. Like when Paul meets new people he can tell what they are really like and his parents might not be able to. I think that the other things that Paul will see in this novel are that Erik will do bad stuff again and he still won’t get in trouble. Sincerely, Sea Grape

I agree with that because I think he can see the real side of people. He knows that Erik really is a bad kid how he sneeks out and goes against the rules. I think Paul has that abilty since he’s blind and his conscious is like his pair of eyes. I think he gained this power from the staring into that solar ecclipse. I’m not sure but I think this is the reason that Paul has these powers to see things that other people, with full vision, cannot notice. So all in all, I agree with your answer, Sea Grape! :) Sinceraly,

Water Apple

I agree with what you said about Paul seeing stuff like that. I think that Paul shouldn’t have gotten kicked off the soccer team. It was unfair for the coach to do that to him because Paul tried to tell him that he was wrong and that he is the best player on the team and that he could block every pass that came to him but he wouldn’t listen to him. I think that Paul should have fought the coach of the soccer team because Paul can prove that he is the best on the team and that he can block anybody kick. For Erik I think that they should move football practice to the early morning so that they wouldn’t get struck by lightning anymore when the lightning strikes everyday at four. I wouldn’t want to risk anybody else’s lives by going to practice in the late afternoon, so I would move it to the early morning. Thank you for responding water apple! =]   Sincerely,

I agree with you. Practice should get cancelled and paul should be allowed on the team. He is one off the best players and the coaches know that and shouldn’t take that away from him because of his poor eyesight. About practice, I agree they should stop having it in the afternoon, its just too dangerous with all the lightning and terrrible weather. They should have stopped practicing right after Mikes death, yet they still go and risk other players health. All in all I agree, and Im anxious to hear back from you. Water Apple!

== GREETINGS, SPECIAL AGENTS. SCHMORLANDO HERE. YOU’RE DOING A GREAT JOB DISCUSSING THE ISSUES IN THE NOVEL WITH EACH OTHER. ONE QUESTION—DO YOU THINK PAUL'S PARENTS SHOULD HAVE FOUGHT HARDER TO KEEP HIM ON THE TEAM? IF SO, WHY DO YOU THINK THEY DIDN'T? GOT TO GO. I’M CATCHING A RED EYE BACK TO L.A. FOR MY LATEST MOVIE, I MEAN, JOB… ==

I think that they should put all of the Seventh and eight graders should be put into the high school. I think that they should put into the high school because the high school is really big and they will have enough room for them. Even if they don’t have enough room for everyone in the high school then they can transport new portables to the high school and then everybody will fit! If there still isn’t enough room then the seventh grade could go into the middle school and the eighth grade can go into the high school. I am excited to hear back from you!!! Thank you, Sea Grape

I think that when they bring back the portables in Lake Windsor Downs Middle school that they will make all the people that got moved to Tangerine Middle School go back to Lake Windsor Downs. Although they might make Paul move back to his first school he will try to protest to stay with his new friends at his new school. I think that he will protest because he has made so much new friends in his new school and he is doing so well in soccer that he won’t want to move back to Lake Windsor Downs where he doesn’t have as much friends as he does now. Sincerely, Sea Grape I think that when portables are rebuilt, Paul will rebel against his old school and continue to go to Tangerine Middle. I think this because he didn’t really like his old school that much and he couldn’t even play soccer there. Now that he is respected and accepted among the team at Tangerine Middle, I don’t think hell want to leave. I think Joey will though, because he doesn’t seem to like the kids like Victor and Gino and he thinks they make fun of them. Overall, when the school is back and ready to take student in, I don’t think Paul Fisher will be there, I think he will be at a school where he is accapted and is not seen as a “different” person. Sincerely , Water Apple

// I agree!!!What do you think or poem should be about? I think that we should talk about the soccer teams between Lake Windsor Middle and Tangerine because there was a lot of tension between that soccer game and it would be a good poem to write about. If you don’t want to write about that we can write about how you can feel different when you go to either one of the schools. I think that it would be possible to write about the different types of classrooms that each school has like Lake Windsor has portables that the seventh graders have to go in and tangerine has actual classrooms in the school that they can go in. These are my ideas about the poem that we have to write. Now if you dint like my ideas brainstorm some ideas that you would like to write about. // // Sincerely, // // Sea Grape // I agree we could talk about the soccer game. There was a lot of tension going on between the two teams, when they were both attempting to be the best team in the league, since at the time they were both undefeated. I also think we could talk about the difference in the way the two schools are ran, the different people who go there and all the other things that differ in the two local schools but I think the main theme should be about the soccer matchup. I don’t care though, what do you think about it? Yer boy, Water Apple I also think that we should talk about the soccer game. How do u think this is? Change it if u want or fix it around a little bit. Sea Grape Which two people do you think the dialoge could be between? I think we should mainly try to use Victor and Paul for Tangerine Middle and then Gino from Lake Windsdor Downs. We could talk about the soccer game and the rivalry between the two schools. I started something here about the soccer team, its just like a random draft, what do you think, we can change it and make it a lot better. Let me know what you think, Water Apple


 * Voice 1 || Both || Voice 2 ||
 * 1. Leadership

4. We will play hard

8. We are undefeated

10. we play rough

13.we block really good

16. go war eagles! || 3. This game is ours to win.

6. I will take control of this game.

9. And we're not giving up now.

12.we cant lose his game

15.we are a strong team

18.i think we have won || 2. Determaination.

5. We will stop at nothing less than victory

7. We cannot be stoped

11.we are tough

14.we shoot like champions

17.lets go Seagulls ||

GREETINGS, SPECIAL AGENTS. IT'S YOUR FAVORITE LANGUAGE ARTS SECRETARY. YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB DISCUSSING THE POEMS. I AGREE-THE TENSION FROM THE SOCCER TEAMS WOULD MAKE A GREAT POEM. YOU MAY WANT TO STICK WITH JUST TWO VOICES--VICTOR AND GINO FOR EXAMPLE--TO MAKE IT EASIER ON YOURSELVES. I MUST GO NOW. I'VE GOT A MEETING WITH MY AGENT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK--

SCHMORLANDO P.S. I PUT YOUR WIKI PAL LINK BACK AT THE TOP. I really like that. I think we need to add a little more though so I will add some and copy and paste it onto my thing. Tell what you think and make some changes. Sincerely, Sea grape  I think that is really good. We are focusing in on the two captains of the rival teams, Gino and Victor. We have a really good idea and rough draft so far and we can continue to add on and improve it. So far, I like how we are focusing mainly on the two main players showing they're team is better and they're going to lead them to victory. I like what you did, showing how each team believe they are better. I will add on and you can make some more revisions later. So far, I think it is going smoothly. Good Job,﻿  Water Apple


 * ===Voice 1=== || ===Both=== || ===Voice 2=== ||
 * ===1. Leadership.===

16. War Eagles! War Eagles!
|| ===3. This game is ours to win.===

18.I think we will be victorious.
|| ===2. Determaination.===

17.Lets go Seagulls!
||

I changed it a little bit. I added some too it and I think I need to add a little bit more. If you, could add some more if you think that is a good idea. Do you like what I did to the poem or do you think I should change it or if i am repaeting myself too much. Sea grape

4. We will play hard 8. We are undefeated 10. we play rough 13.we block really good
 * I think for the most part we're pretty much done. It seems as if we have began writing at the start of the game with both of the captains and took it all the way down to the end of the game. You did great work my bull. Good job Homie G, you da bestest. **
 * Voice 1 || Both || Voice 2 ||
 * 1. Leadership

18.Even if we are hurt

22War eagles! war eagles! || 3. This game is ours to win. 6. I will take control of this game. 9. And we're not giving up now. 12.we cant lose his game 15.we are a strong team 16.time is running out 17.we cannot afford this lose

20. lets pull our team together 21. well win without a doubt || 2. Determaination. 5. We will stop at nothing less than victory 7. We cannot be stoped 11.we are tough 14.we shoot like champions

19. even if we are struggling

23.lets win seagulls ||

I think that we are done this poem. I think that we need to practice it though. This poem is really good and I also like how the poem starts in the beginning of the game and it ends and the end of the soccer game. Sea Grape