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Question 1: Some things that Paul can see that his paretns wont or cant are that Erik does some bad things when their paretns arent around. Such as, Erik snuck out of the house in the middle of the night to go meet up with friends. And Paul didn’t even bother telling his parents because they think Erik is the perfect child and he never does anything wrong. And once he even tried to kill paul with a baseball bat! He ahd a ski mask on but Paul can tellit was him. And their dad is blinded by his football career, and so he only thinks of Erik as the favorite child by him. And his mom isnt on any sides, but whenever she’s around, Erik always acts goody-goody. He isnt a perfect child around mom,but he doesn’t do anything bad ,like try to kill Paul. And I think Paul will still see Erik dongi bad things. And he will also see things at school going on that his parents wont believe.

Sincerely, Raspberries J J J ====Question 1: I think some things that Paul can see but his parents can’t are he see’s everything in a different point of view. Paul’s mom and dad don’t see that Erik is actually really bad but Paul can and refuses to tell them. Erik does bad things such as trying to kill Paul, sneaking out at night to be with friends, and acts like someone hes not. He acts like he is the perfect child, when really he is actually very bad. So in the end, I totally agree with you. ====

Sincerely,
====♥☺♥ NECTERINE ♥☺♥ ==== Question 2: I agree with you because as we just found out Erik doesn’t even care that his close friend on the football team is dead! He even makes fun of him! And for question two Paul does not deserve to get kicked off the soccer team. H should stand up for himself and declare that he is the obvious best goalie and he can see fine. I feel very bad for Paul because soccer is one of the only things that Paul does that keeps him distracted from the real world. And his dad is too caught up in the “ Erik Fisher football dream” to even care about his son. And for the second part of Question 2 about the lightining problem I think the practice should be changed to an earlier time. And I think that because in the book someone states that lightining hits at the same time every day. And every day at that time the high school boys are out practicing football. And in another part of the book, Paul’s mom says that the leading cause of accidental death is lightining strike! So, I think the practice time should be changed. What do you think? Hope to hear from you soon! Sincerely, <3 <3 <3 Raspberries JJJ

== I also agree with you, Erik is very unconsiderate and a horrible friend. I mean, what kind of person laughs about a friend dying? And for question two I also agree with you. Paul should not be kicked off the team just because of his eyesight, even though he can see fine. I think before they kick Paul off the team they should check his eyes out before they make a final decision. That way, they know that he has bad eyesight. And yes I feel really bad for Paul because soccer was his only interest and that’s the only thing he could be honorable about. Now since Erik is going to be in place for Mike Costello’s position, Paul’s dad will only care about the “Erick Fisher football dream” instead of caring about Paul sometimes. And also, I think the coaches are very stupid for not making the practices before when the lightning strikes. It is very dangerous for the kids to be playing in that time period and can result in death. That’s just crazy. Anyway right back soon! ==

Necterine!(:
== GREETINGS, SPECIAL AGENTS. SCHMORLANDO HERE. YOU’RE DOING A GREAT JOB DISCUSSING THE ISSUES IN THE NOVEL WITH EACH OTHER. ONE QUESTION—WHAT SORTS OF PROBLEMS COULD ARISE WITH A MORNING FOOTBALL PRACTICE? GOT TO GO. I’M CATCHING A RED EYE BACK TO L.A. FOR MY LATEST MOVIE, I MEAN, JOB… ==

Question 3: Dear Nectarine, I agree with you and what you said about Erik and how h is a bad friend to Mike. He didn’t even care and like that you pointed out that they should ckeck Paul’s eyes before they actually kick him off the team. It’s wrong to kick him off the etam when h can see everything perfectly fine with his glasses on. I I think if I was the principal at Lake Windsdor Downs Middle School I would stay calm and try to stay cool while most of my students would leave because of the problem. And I would give the seventh graders two options and the eighth graders one. For the seventh graders I would let them choose between going to Tangerine Middle and sqeezing in to the middle school. And fot the eighth graders I would allow them to go to Lake Windsdor Downs High School. What option would you choose? Right back soon!!! I think the option I would choose would be for the seventh graders I would try to squeeze in Lake Winsdor, because Tangerine Middle looks really scary to go to because of the kids that go there. If I went to Tangerine Middle I would be scared that the kids would hurt me because of what they did at the carnvial. And for Shmorelando’s question I think challenges that could happen if they have morning practices is I think Erik and other kids on the team will get mad because they have to get up early. Also maybe another kid could die because another muckfire will start in the morning. NECTERINE! Question 4: Dear Nectorine J , I agree with your response as to that Erik and the football players will get mad because they have to get up early. All of the teenagers I know love to sleep in. And even some I don’t know, will probably sleep in. But, I would rather practice early because as the saying says, it’s better to be safe than sorry. And for my answer to question 4 I think Paul will not like to have to go home. He really seems to like his new school, and he even has a new group of friends. And if I were Paul’s mother, I would still let him go to Tangerine Middle because he seems to be having a lot of fun. And at Tangerine Middle he has the opportunity to play soccer, but at Lake Windsdor Downs, the principal knows about his vision. And I so to conclude I think that Paul will continue to go to Tangerine Middle because his mom will figure something out for him. What do you think about this? Write back soon. Your pal, Raspberries == I agree with you because I don’t think Paul will be too happy returning to Lake Winsdor. He seems to have created new friendships with kids from Tangerine and back at Lake Winsdor he only has one friend which is Joey. Also, if he returns to Lake Winsdor that means that he wouln’t be able to play soccer. Soccer is Pauls only hobbie and interest. Also, I think Paul will become so attached to the people and soccer team in Tangerine Middle that it will be really hard for him to return home. Maybe in the end Paul can just end up staying at Tangerine? Anyway, write back soon! ==

NECTERINE!♥
Hey rasberries! I see you didn’t write back, but that’s ok! Im just going to share with you my ideas I think we should do for the poem. First of all, I think that we should do it about someone who plays soccer instead of an ordinary student, just so it can be more interesting. Also, I think it should be someone from Tangerine Middle School because they are more rough and agressiive so the poem can describe someone who likes to push people out of their way and fight back. Maybe we could do it about Victor Guzman? Just because he is the captain and probably the most aggressive one on the Tangerine soccer team. Those are just some of my ideas and I can’t wait to hear yours! We don’t have to do these ideas but im just giving an idea of what we could do!

Sincerely your wiki partner,

☺♥NECTERINE♥☺

Dear Nectarine: I agree with you because I want Paul to stay in Tangerine because soccer is his only hobby and I wouldn’t want to see Paul lose that. And I don’t know if you’ve heard about this before but we are going to be performing a two-voice poem. And I think we should do Tangernie students and Lake Windsdor Downs student instead of soccer player because we can get more info. And I want to be the Lake Windsdor Downs Middle student but I will be anything, let me know what you want to be. And so we could say something about tough guys and kind guys at the schools. And also we could say something about how they are so different but are alike at the same time, like they both have been good for Paul and they are both good for making new friends. Wiki me with any ideas at all. We need lots. Lets make sure we do good on this project so give as many ideas as possible. Your Wiki Pal, J     J J J RaSpBeRrIeS!! TTYL! sorry i responded it didnt show up.

Dear Nectarine, sorry about the not responding, it didn’t show up. And I think we should use Victor Gutzman for the Tangerine Middle, and so I now agree that soccer players would be better. Also, I think that we should do Joey Costello for Lake Windsdor Downs Middle because he is the complete opposite of Victor. And some things that are different are that Victor is the team captain and scores almost every game, and Joey stinks. And I will be Victor. And some similarities are that they both love soccer, they both are at one point, Paul’s friend and lastly they both went to tangerine Middle. I agree with you that Victor is vicious and Joey is one of the nice and sweet kids who don’t hurt anyone, unlike Victor. Please wiki me with any more ideas! J !!!!!

RaSpBeRrIeS !!!!!!!! J J   Dear Raspberries, So we both agree to do Victor as one voice and Joey as the other voice? Ok so maybe we could do like all tough words for Victors poem and then like a rule follower and nice boy for Joeys poem. And what should we do for both voices? Maybe we could do like them saying, were both our own individual person. Just a thought we don’t have to do it but maybe we could. Write back for more ideas! <span style="color: #9933ff; font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%;">Your wiki pal, <span style="color: #9933ff; font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%;">Nectarine! ♥  <span style="color: #9933ff; font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%;">By the way, sorry I didn't do a table it wasn't working  <span style="color: #9933ff; font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: 115%;">** GREETINGS, SPECIAL AGENTS. IT'S YOUR FAVORITE LANGUAGE ARTS SECRETARY. YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB DISCUSSING THE POEMS. I THINK YOUR IDEA OF USING VICTOR'S AND JOEY'S VOICES IS TERRIFIC. I MUST GO NOW. I'VE GOT A MEETING WITH MY AGENT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK-- **

** SCHMORLANDO ** <span style="color: #9933ff; font-family: 'Century Gothic','sans-serif'; font-size: 16pt; line-height: 0px; overflow: hidden;"> (aka Joey) || Both || Voice 2 (aka Victor) || I'm a good kid. I get scared when i play rough teams. I hated Tangerine because of the gangs. I switched schools again
 * Voice 1
 * Im Joey Costello and I follow the rules

Even though I try my best, I sometimes lose. If i do something wrong on the field, I will have regrets. I am different from kids at Tangerine I fit in at Lake Windsdor I lost my brother Mike

Im not rough and tough

I play on a team with a leader. It's okay to lose I have a regular size house I stay inside when it's cold out. I stay out when I get hurt. || We both are our own individuals. We both love to play soccer. We both have our own groups of friends We both went to tangerine Middle We both our leaders in our school.

We both try our best. We both play our heart out.

We both have a spot in our groups though.

We both have our own personalities We both have suffered

We are both respected for our actions.

We both try to win We both have money I am me || Im Victor Guzman and I never follow the rules on the field I've been to jail before. I just push the team back, but harder. I love Tangerine and my friends. This is where i should be

I always win. When im on the soccer field I go hard with no regrets. I am different from kids at Lake Winsdor.

I fit in at Tangerine I had to witness my best friend's brother's death. I am rough and tough

I lead my team to victory It's never okay to lose. I live in a small house Im outside fighting the freeze. Even when I get hurt I fight through it ||

<span style="color: #00b0f0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">Dear Nectarine: <span style="color: #00b0f0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">I love our poem. I put in a table. We should add some more stuff though. Feel free to change anything that I put it’s not set in stone. And I love your ideas, we should really include them in our poem. I love it so far! Write back soon and remember to add some too!!! Write back soon!

<span style="color: #00b0f0; display: block; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%; text-align: center;">From, your pal <span style="color: #00b0f0; display: block; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%; text-align: center;">Raspberries!!!! <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Juice ITC'; font-size: 20pt; line-height: 115%; margin: 0in 0in 10pt;">Dear Rasberries, <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Juice ITC'; font-size: 20pt; line-height: 115%; margin: 0in 0in 10pt; text-indent: 0.5in;">I just wrote some ideas in the table but I couldn’t really think of what to do for both voices. You don’t have to agree and feel free to change any of the things I wrote. So far the peom is turning out really good! Can’t wait to see it when it's done! It’s going to be great! Write back!(: <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Juice ITC'; font-size: 20pt; line-height: 115%; margin: 0in 0in 10pt;">From,  Nectarine <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 20pt; line-height: 115%;">♥     <span style="color: #9900ff; display: block; font-family: 'Curlz MT'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%; text-align: center;">Dear Nectarine,  <span style="color: #9900ff; font-family: 'Curlz MT'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%; margin: 0in 0in 10pt;">I love our poem so far, it looks great!! I love your ideas, and feel free to change mine. It’s really coming along and I agree with the choice of a soccer player. Write back with ideas soon!!!!!!!! Whos who i will be Victor if you want!!!????   Dear Raspberries, Wow you wrote a lot! I just added a little (sorry it wasn’t a lot!) Anyway, I think we’re pretty much done. If you want to change anything or add better words or something feel free. From ya girl homie g, NECATARINE!<33333333 <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">Dear Nectarine: <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">HAHA homie g :) I absolulutely love our poem and I think it sounds better wothout the rhyme. And so I will see you soon!!! And write back soon! Who will be who?? ill be anyone who do want to be?    <span style="height: 26.25pt; left: 0px; margin-left: 266.25pt; margin-top: 24.85pt; position: absolute; text-align: left; width: 38.25pt; z-index: 251658240;"> <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">From Raspberries     <span style="color: #7030a0; font-family: 'Goudy Stout','serif'; font-size: 14pt; line-height: 115%;">!!! :)